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Editorial Style Guidelines

Iona Guidelines and Mission Statement

All major publications must include at least the first line of the Iona College Mission Statement, which reads as follows:
“Iona is a college in the tradition of the Christian Brothers and American Catholic higher education.”

A similar version is also acceptable:
“Iona is a college dedicated to teaching in the tradition of the Christian Brothers and American Catholic education.”

Also acceptable is:
“Celebrating over 200 years of Christian Brothers’ education." (This is used in current advertising campaigns.)

When referring to Iona College in a sentence, without using the word Iona, capitalize the word "College."
Based on the College’s selectivity, more students are interested in attending.

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Names and Departments

When listing names and class year, there is no comma separation between them:
John A. Smith '84

Titles after names belong before the class year, with a comma separating the name and title:
Joseph E. Todd, Esq. '78
James A. Liguori, CFC '65

For religious orders and doctorate degrees, upon first reference use the designated abbreviation after the full name. Eg:
James A. Liguori, CFC
John Mahon, PhD
Thereafter, reference will be as:
Br. Liguori
Dr. Mahon

There is a comma used when listing someone who is a jr. or sr.
William Strunk, Jr.

There is no comma used when listing someone who is a “III” or higher.
Charles E. Crowers III

No space is needed between a class year and an advanced degree, but must be separated from the previous class year with a comma and a space.
William Baldwin '45, '48MBA

No periods are needed for degrees or religious titles.
James A. Liguori, CFC
Brian X. Doe '89, '94MS, '99PhD

When referring to the Iona president, refer to him as James A. Liguori, CFC. Only refer to him as (Br.) James A. Liguori, CFC when signing his name on a letter.

When listing Br Liguori’s name in publications, add his class year and advanced degree when others have their advanced degrees listed. Eg.:
James A. Liguori, CFC, EdD ’65

A person’s occupational title is listed in lowercase after the name. However, the department name remains capitalized.
John Doe, PhD, dean of the School of Architecture
Thereafter in the piece, the title will remain in lowercase. However, if on the first reference, the title is listed before the name, it will be capitalized:
The Dean of the School of Architecture, John Doe, PhD, should be contacted for more information.

When listing an academic department, it should be lowercase, unless the department is a proper noun:
Susan Brown, history, taught a class.
John Mahon, PhD, English, loves Shakespeare.
The Department of Mathematics will hold a seminar.

Multiple listings of names should be listed alphabetically by last name. When the last name is hyphenated, it should be alphabetized by the first letter of the first surname, otherwise it is listed by the last surname:
Richard Petriccione
Carl Procario-Foley
      Victor Stanionis
Joanne Laughlin Steele

If there are multiple names listed (i.e. board members, honorees, etc.) there must be consistency on how the names are listed. If one name includes a middle initial, they all must. (The exception is those without middle initials.)

A person’s academic degree is listed at the terminal level only, unless that person is a graduate of Iona. The alumnus’ degree year is listed after their name, with each Iona degree and corresponding graduation year listed. Bachelor degrees are listed by abbreviated year, master degrees are designated by graduation year and the master MA, MBA, MS, MSEd or MST designation. No space is needed between the class year and degree. If a person has multiple degrees from Iona, they are separated by commas and each degree is listed. Eg.:
Herb Lopez ’92
Patrick Lyons ’96, ’00MST, ’04MBA

An exception will be made for the College Catalog and the Student Handbook. Only in these two publications will it be acceptable to list ALL employees’ highest degree earned, regardless of the institution awarding the degree. If the person graduated from Iona, the listing will include their graduating class year. Eg.:
Elizabeth Olivieri, MA ’00 (Since the graduate degree was earned at a different institution, it is listed before the undergraduate degree year.)
Joe Valenti, MA

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Book/Periodical Titles

Book titles are always italicized.

Magazines, periodicals and newspaper names are italicized.

Titles of articles and speeches are written within quotation marks. Include punctuation like commas and periods within quotation marks, not after.

Throughout a given publication, make sure the manner in which names are listed is consistent. If the first name is not abbreviated, or if the middle initial is included on the first reference, it must be included as such in the rest of the piece. The only exception would be in a story, where the general rules of the AP Style Guide would apply.

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Formatting and Layout

All text for publications should be supplied to College Communications in a Word document. To make arrangements for a publication, contact Herb Lopez, ext. 2686.

No graphic images should be embedded into the Word document. Images need to be supplied as high resolution (300 dpi or above jpeg or tiff files), and saved as a separate file. On average, publications take six to eight weeks for completion depending upon size, scope and nature of project. Please contact College Communications for time frame.

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Punctuation and Capitalization

Apostrophe - should be slanted to the left when denoting a class year, eg. Jane Smith ’98. In order to switch the apostrophe: strike ctrl+apostrophe, then strike apostrophe again.

No comma before conjunction in a simple series:
The car is available in black, brown and blue.

Use a comma before the concluding conjunction in a complex series of phrases:
My dog’s favorite activities include barking at the mailman, chasing my neighbor’s cat, and digging up the backyard.

When referencing academic degrees, use no periods: eg. BA, BS, MA, MS, MFA, MD, PhD, etc.

Possessives - Use apostrophes after singular and some plural nouns to indicate possession. (Examples: Jim’s desk; women’s room) When either a singular or plural noun ends in s, use only the apostrophe. (Examples: James’ desk; ladies’ room)

Internet - always capitalize

Years/decades - to make a year plural, do not use an apostrophe: 1990s, in the ’60s; class reunion for years ending in 2s and 7s.

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Miscellaneous Guidelines

Academic degrees and honors are capitalized; a generic reference to a degree is not. There is no “s” after Master when referring to the academic degree; there is an “s” when a generic reference is used.
Master of Education
master’s degree in education

Ampersand (&) - Use this symbol if it is part of an official title; otherwise spell out the word “and.”

Biannually/bimonthly/biweekly - no hyphen; means every other year/month/week. Semimonthly and semiweekly mean twice a year/month/week.

Blessed Edmund Ignatius Rice - founder of the Congregation of Christian Brothers.

board of trustees - lower case on references except when referring specifically to Iona College Board of Legal Trustees.

Bullets - When using bullets, lowercase the first word of each line and separate each bullet with a semicolon. The only exception would be if a complete sentence is bulleted, where each point should begin with the first word capitalized and end with a period.

Campaign - capitalize when referring to a major fund-raising drive, such as Vision Into Reality: The Campaign for Iona College. Use “the Campaign” in subsequent references.

When colons are used to list more than two events, semi-colons should separate each line. The last semi-colon should be followed with the word “and.”

Iona graduates will be sought after because they will be:

  • ethical and skilled decision makers motivated to leadership and service;
  • professionals informed and enriched by a liberal arts education;
  • workers who have achieved competence through both classroom instruction and actual experience;
  • lifelong learners adaptable to new information and technologies; and
  • individuals who integrate the spiritual, emotional and physical dimensions of their lives.

Days of the week - never abbreviate in text.

E-mail.

Envelopes will have the return address with the Iona College logo and crest at the top left-hand corner. The return address should include the department and address of the College.

Esq. - When using “Esq.” after a name, do not use Mr., Mrs. or Ms. before the name.

Jane P. Smiley, Esq.

Extension – for telephone numbers, use “ext.” followed by a space and the four-digit number.

Faculty/staff – when used alone, treat it as a singular noun, (Eg. Our faculty is the best. Our staff is well-educated.) When referring to the people who make up the faculty or staff, say “faculty members” or “staff members.”

"Fund raiser" or "fund raising" when used, should be consistent throughout the piece. Either hyphenate or put as two words, never as one word:
Fund raising is fun
Fund-raising can be hard

“Incorporated” should be abbreviated and capitalized as Inc. when used as part of a corporate name. It should be listed as the company does.
Prudential Securities, Inc.
Texaco Inc.

Measurement - use figures and spell out inches, feet, yards and other measures. Hyphenate adjectives before nouns - he is 5 feet 6 inches tall; the 5-foot-6-inch man.

Mission statement - the updated Iona College Mission Statement was adopted on December 13, 2001. The full document must appear in all major publications (viewbooks, catalogs, etc.).

Numbers:

  • In general, spell out zero through nine (and first through ninth) and give numerals for 10 and above (10th, etc.)
  • Fractions, such as two-thirds, should be spelled out. If paired with a whole number, use the decimal system: 2.25.
  • Percentages, measurements, GPAs and ages should always be represented by numerals.
  • Headlines: use numerals, even for 1-9. Do not use a numeral to begin a sentence.
  • All ages should be represented by numerals.

Percent - Spell out the word in text. The “%” sign may be used in numerical charts and headlines.

Phone numbers - for those that include the area code, put the area code in parentheses and use a hyphen in between the rest of the number - (914) 633-2000.

Punctuation should not be underlined or italicized.

Residence hall - use instead of “dorm”.

Time: am/pm - do not use periods; lower-case the letters. Official invitations might opt for more formal use of times, including “o’clock”; use "noon" and "midnight" rather than "12 pm" and "12 am" to avoid confusion. When using numerals, include the :00 after the hour, do not just use (8 pm).
8:00 am or 11:30 pm

Year - when using plural, do not use an apostrophe after the numbers (example: 1980s).

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Frequently Misspelled and Misused Words

accept is to receive; except is with the exclusion of

adviser not advisor

affect is to have an influence on; effect is something brought about by a cause

all right, never alright

alma mater – no caps and no italics

alumni – one man is an alumnus; one woman is an alumna; several men or a group of men and women are alumni; several women are alumnae.

backward (not backwards)

basement – use lower level instead

biannual is twice a year (same as semiannual); biennial means every two years

despise

e-mail (always use hyphen)

ensure means guarantee; insure refers to an insurance policy

freshman, freshmen – use the singular when referring to an individual or the whole class; freshmen is the plural noun.

Internet

it’s – contraction meaning it is; its – possessive pronoun

Mass Communication (no “s”)

playwright

repetition

sacrilegious

stationary is not moving; stationery is writing paper

School of Arts and Science (not Sciences)

toward (not towards)

website - one word.

websites and e-mail addresses - always lowercase (www.iona.edu or alumni@iona.edu).

that/which - "That" defines and restricts; "which" does not. The way to tell which one you need is that, if you are using which properly, you'll usually need to precede it with a comma. (Note that the previous sentence provides an example of an exception to the rule.)
The story that was printed last night is inaccurate; this morning's version is correct.
The story, which appeared on the front page, has been proven to be inaccurate.

 

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